erasing my chances of being glee.
With Green Day playing in the background,
I say my thoughts aloud.
I think about the things I’ve done,
Whether or not I’ve been a good son.
The blaring of the TV fills the house,
making my radio seem as quiet as a mouse.
I rest my head on the pillow,
waiting for the tears to fall.
I then hear a knock on my door,
so towards it, I slowly start to crawl.
I then hear a knock on my door,
so towards it, I slowly start to crawl.
“I told you to wake me up when September ends!”
I say to my intruder.
I rest my head onto the wall,
the coldness on my skin made me shudder.
The banging went louder,
the door handle shook.
Just when I was ready for my doom,
I heard my mother say:
“It’s already October! Clean your room!”
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Happy October everyone! 😀
Can I do humor or what? If you didn’t get it, then I failed 😛
It's so well written. I like the ending too, it made me laugh. 🙂
LOL!! Did you write that yourself? It's really good.
Thank you for sharing. You did a good job. 🙂
Well isn't that just like a mother? "It's already October! Clean your room!"
LOL I love the way you write!!
Great job! I wasn't expecting that ending!!
This is cute! I can't make anything rhyme for the life of me. You are very clever!
Ha! You did fantastic! Your rhyming was perfect too! And I kept hearing your words to a tune too.
Lol. That was brilliant. Great poem 😀
Great poem, love what you write
I love the Green Day reference!
I love how you write, the end cheered me up! Wonderful
I can see this happening with my daughter. Cute poem!
Lol…I didn't expect that great poem.
I read the sign about September and loved that I wanted that month to end. Then I read your poem it is excellent. I really enjoyed it 🙂
One day you'll be a famous author and I'll be able to say HEY I used to comment on her blog 🙂
In my house I guess its October every day. Lovely poem.
ROFL I love the ending. When I saw the title I thought of Green Day's song which is one of my favorite. 🙂
Beautiful poem. Although I must say that I do love September so I want to be as awake as possible 🙂
This poem made me laugh . Wake up , it's October 🙂
Love this poem. September is always a great month for me……it is also my bday in Sept. !
You are such a great writer. I had to chuckle at the end when you found out it was already October!
What a cute little poem!
I thought you really did a great job on this poem! Yeah, October is cleaning month 😀
Hahahah adding the mother's line was a win-win! I love it!<br />PS: I love this song! 🙂
LOL. Well September has ended and you better be wide awake! Love your poem,
i love this 🙂 and happy october to you as well~
I like it a lot!
This was great especially the ending